Film challenges:
Editing challenge:
Positives:
- Brief met
- Entertaining concept
- Very creative
- Focusing on the technical aspects rather than the narrative
- Good choice in song
- The beat of the song goes well with the jarring jump cuts
Constrictive criticism:
- Could have been longer
- Slightly out of focus
- Should have exported it in better quality
- Aspect ratio could have been adjusted
- Maybe a change of location and or movement
Positives:
- Very unusual concept
- Colours were a good idea
- Good camera angles
- Checking the focusing and the ISO
- Executing the filter idea could have been done better
- Unmotivated sounds that could have been more effective if had more thought
1920's style challenge:
Positives:
- Playful narrative
- Good starting with a close up on what the story narrative is about
- Fits the aesthetic well with the grain
- Font fits well with the period
Constructive criticism:
- Could have had more varied shots
- Text boxes were too long and could have been shortened
- Some more stylistic composition with the shot types could have been used
- More dialogue would have made the narrative more interesting
- Could have been more scenes to further the narrative
Positives:
- Good choice in music (fits the tone of the video)
- Nice choice of theme
- Good shots used that portray meaning through the lyrics
- Good length
- Good fading of audio and video
Constructive criticism:
- Could have been exported in a better quality
- Could have examined it and focused on more than one character
- Could have used more of a variety of shots instead of reusing some of them
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